I would let your 9 year old do her own narrations. If she balks at it, have her write them on the computer. It should only be a few sentences, no longer than a paragraph. If she isn't able to, I would help her with summarizing out loud, then have her type it.
Or if you don't want to continue with it, drop it.
If you decide to add creative writing, we are really enjoying time4writing elementary paragraphs. My son's teacher is very helpful!
As far as writing goes here, stick with what gets done and doesn't make people cry! :)