tammyw Posted November 9, 2012 Share Posted November 9, 2012 Thanks for all the feedback everyone. My daughter was very touched. She actually wants to submit her story to Stone Soup (she doesn't have high expectations but figures if she continues to submit, maybe someday she'll get accepted!) I deleted the content, just because i don't think you're supposed to post something online if you want to try and publish? I might be wrong, but anyway, on the slim, slim chance, I thought I'd better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.... Posted November 11, 2012 Share Posted November 11, 2012 That's REALLY good!!!! :hurray: You have to save that in her portfolio (if you keep one). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tammyw Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 That's REALLY good!!!! :hurray: You have to save that in her portfolio (if you keep one). Thank you for the kind words! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stripe Posted November 21, 2012 Share Posted November 21, 2012 Thiis is entirely charming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tammyw Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 Thiis is entirely charming! :) Thank you for taking the time to read it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwg Posted November 21, 2012 Share Posted November 21, 2012 Great story! :iagree: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ohdanigirl Posted November 30, 2012 Share Posted November 30, 2012 Wow! I love all the vocabulary. Startled, stormed, shriveled, bellowed... It really makes the story interesting and helps paint a picture. She is also fantastic at using dialogue. I must say, this is wonderful for a 9 y/o. I am very impressed. Would you mind sharing what her previous writing experience has been? Oh, and thank you so much for sharing. What a cute story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mom31257 Posted November 30, 2012 Share Posted November 30, 2012 What a great story! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tammyw Posted December 9, 2012 Author Share Posted December 9, 2012 Wow! I love all the vocabulary. Startled, stormed, shriveled, bellowed... It really makes the story interesting and helps paint a picture. She is also fantastic at using dialogue. I must say, this is wonderful for a 9 y/o. I am very impressed. Would you mind sharing what her previous writing experience has been? Oh, and thank you so much for sharing. What a cute story. Wow, thanks for the great feedback! I will be sure to pass it along to her. A while back, we decided not to try and use any writing curriculum. We try to loosely follow the Brave Writer lifestyle, but I honestly owe a lot of her style to the amount of reading she does. She reads a lot, and then writes for fun, usually in the evening. That's pretty much it, honestly. I'm happy to hear that she is doing well, based on the feedback here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kfamily Posted December 10, 2012 Share Posted December 10, 2012 She did a great job with this story! It was fun to read.:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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