Kalypso Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 I am behind in some of my grading, so today I am trying to catch up. This was written by my dd13 during an obviously very chaotic episode at our home. A Descriptive Paragraph Squealing pigs. Flopping fish. When one looks around, chaos meets his eye. The oldest boy appears as though he is part fish, and one would think, by the sounds ushered from his throat, the he was in agony and dying. But no - there is no disease in the child. The two children younger than the dying fish-boy are intent on killing each other. They tease, fight, and chase each other constantly. One would think to himself: What is this place? A home-asylum for the insane? But he is wrong. It’s SUPPOSED to be children busy at their schoolwork. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C_l_e_0..Q_c Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 LOL! Ok, not really something the local schoolboard would appreciate. I think it would be reason enough to send CPS and take the children away! But oh so true... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrsrevmeg Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 :lol: LOVE IT!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pink Fairy Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 Oh my goodness, you absolutely must frame this and hang it in a prominent spot. It's the dryness of it that's killing me. :lol: Is your daughter always this funny? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elegantlion Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 I am behind in some of my grading, so today I am trying to catch up. This was written by my dd13 during an obviously very chaotic episode at our home. A Descriptive Paragraph Squealing pigs. Flopping fish. When one looks around, chaos meets his eye. The oldest boy appears as though he is part fish, and one would think, by the sounds ushered from his throat, the he was in agony and dying. But no - there is no disease in the child. The two children younger than the dying fish-boy are intent on killing each other. They tease, fight, and chase each other constantly. One would think to himself: What is this place? A home-asylum for the insane? But he is wrong. It’s SUPPOSED to be children busy at their schoolwork. :hurray: :hurray: I love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mom4him Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 :lol::smilielol5::smilielol5::smilielol5::lol: Was she at my house? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Piaaree Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 :laugh: Too funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalypso Posted February 25, 2010 Author Share Posted February 25, 2010 My dd13 has a wonderful sense of humor. I loved how she captured the moment in this paragraph. It amazes me how everyone can be working really well and then chaos can erupt the next moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frontier Mom Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 Now that is hysterical!! Glad someone else has those days. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraGB Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 :smilielol5:Hilarious! I love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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