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Does anyone know of a good website or you tube video that teaches sentence revision?

Specifically, revising sentences to not use the word "I?"


I'm teaching a business communication class in community college this semester. Although the word "I" is allowed, the OVERUSE of "I" is not allowed.


Having a short video or worksheet (or both) would be useful for this group of students.




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