KellyGirl Posted February 2, 2009 Share Posted February 2, 2009 My ds 10 is working on a paper about polar bears. He wrote three different "hook" sentences, and needs to collect votes for the best one. I posted this on my blog, but only got a few responses and he wants more input. Thanks for your help! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Tree House Academy Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 Definitely the first one. The second sentence is boring, third is too factual. The first one is perfect! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angela in ohio Posted February 3, 2009 Share Posted February 3, 2009 Finally, something the hive can agree on! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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