Violet Crown Posted December 10, 2013 Share Posted December 10, 2013 Spontaneous composition, apparently indebted to Wordsworth. --------------- Deep inside his hidden nature, Hidden power, deadly power. Slow but endless outward raining, Disappearing, dripping, draining, Never gone but slowly waning Warning off all creatures near thee Making men and all beasts fear thee, Uranium! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCB Posted December 10, 2013 Share Posted December 10, 2013 I really like it! That is fantastic for a 5th grader. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regentrude Posted December 10, 2013 Share Posted December 10, 2013 Very nice. Reminded me of the Raven. Disappearing, dripping, draining is my favorite line Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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