acurtis75 Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 After a really extended break from doing wwe we are back to it today. I let dd write her own and I'm looking for suggestions to provide her for improvement. Spelling and punctuation was correct. Jack joined the war because he thought it was dishonorable not to join. He wrote poems while he was training. While he was in France he was wounded and not allowed to fight anymore. She told me she wanted to add another sentence about him writing letters to his father but that would have made four sentences and she didn't want to do any unnecessary writing because I said it only had to be three sentences long. We are still working on the concept of doing our best and not being lazy. She told me she tries to write as few words as possible.:glare: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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