Mommy22alyns Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 Her assignment was to write about an experience she has had. The Mythbusters Show I was excited when we went to the Mythbusters show. First we had to find a parking spot. Then we had to go across the street to the Palace Theater. We went to the bathroom before the show. Somebody helped us find our seats. We had a balcony seat. The show was very funny. I had an important question: What myth didn't work as well as they hoped? That's the big question! I loved the show! The End (This was properly indented.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mommy2BeautifulGirls Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 The only thing I would suggest is working on combining sentences. Other than that, it was on topic and everything made sense! (BTW... We went to that show in Detroit a couple weeks ago! It was a good show!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mommy22alyns Posted March 28, 2012 Author Share Posted March 28, 2012 The only thing I would suggest is working on combining sentences. Other than that, it was on topic and everything made sense! (BTW... We went to that show in Detroit a couple weeks ago! It was a good show!) Thanks for the feedback! You're right; she's just now learning to combine sentences. Glad you guys had fun too! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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