simka2 Posted June 21, 2011 Share Posted June 21, 2011 (edited) "The Pepin's have a problem with toads in their shoes. They went to their neighbor Mr. Bradshaw for help. Mr. Bradshaw was not able to help because he had toads in his shoes too." This is actually her 1st attempted narration. She struggled with writing out SHORT phrases and then combining in longer sentences. She could have written a decent narration without the middle step, but it was good for her to really think about what was necessary. ;) This is my child who enjoys to write a lot of content. Pages and pages of words that only flow well in her own head. I am really excited to see develop of bit more "structure" in her writing. Edited June 21, 2011 by simka2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxy Roller Posted June 21, 2011 Share Posted June 21, 2011 It looks good! I can't wait to start WWS in July with my DD11. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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