Porridge Posted May 7, 2019 Share Posted May 7, 2019 (edited) Hello, I'm new to the Chreia format, and would love feedback on this piece so I can better coach my DD. DD is 10. I'm wondering whether the cause and converse are too general? I'd appreciate suggestions for how to give constructive comments. Thank you in advance! —- deleted for DD’s privacy Edited December 5, 2020 by JHLWTM Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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