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Reluctant Writer's Descriptive Paragraph


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DS9 is a very reluctant writer. I am loving WWW with him because the lessons are very short and easy to understand. The step-by-step is really helping him. This week's lesson was to write a descriptive paragraph. Here is what he came up with (the words are all his; I helped him with some of the punctuation):

 

I once went on a field trip to a farm. A farm is a big place with lots of animals. It is noisy there, too, with loud tractors and animals. It also stinks like a skunk where the cows are milked. A word of advice, plug your nose if your field trip is to a farm.

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