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"Sunset" by DS, 5 years old

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DS is submitting this for a local writing contest:




Over the cool Earth the sun sets and the birds sing and the bees buzz.

Under the blue sky where the green leaves tremble and the wind blows roughly.

Where the horses neigh and the sheep baa, baa, and it begins to be night.

And all the animals sleep.



:) adorable!

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