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7.5yo boy's independent writing -- please critique


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"In two 1/2 days I will go to a farm, and the best part is that I get to go in an underground passege."


This is a journal entry, which qualifies as writing for fun in our household, so I did not make any corrections. But I felt tempted to talk about the choice of words, although SWB recommends waiting for a child to develop his own individual style.


What would you do? Thanks very much in advance.

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