thowell Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 She worked through the steps. I did have to help her find the MAIN ideas in each section. So this is done somewhat together but mostly her thoughts. Please tell me what you think and what you feel she may need to strengthen. I. Sylvia was on a train to her cousin’s house II. There is a man sitting next to her. A. he box cakes B. falls asleep III. Sylvia sleeps and dreams IV. She awakes suddenly, train jerks to stop A. wolves on track B. she is afraid V. Wolves jumping at window A. window breaks B. wolf jumps in C. stranger coat over wolf stabs with glass SUMMARY Sylvia is on a train to her cousin’s house and meets a man who offers her cakes, but she refuses. The man and Sylvia fall asleep, but are awaken when the train stops because there are wolves on the track. The wolves begin jumping at the window until it breaks. A wolf jumps through the broken window and the stranger throws a coat over it and stabs it with a piece of glass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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