Honestly, he completely shuts down when writing, because he cannot seem to get back basic sentences, "My dog is big. I went swimming. I loved to go to camp." He doesn't seem to have the critical thinking skills to use all the wonderful verbs, adverbs, adjectives etc. to make a "colorful" paragraph, let alone a whole paper. His writing is very dry and his sentences are very short. On the grammar side, I noticed this year he was getting a lot of basic grammar wrong and eve asked me at one point, "what is an adjective again". I thought BJU would be good on the basic side, but until he has that down, I wasn't sure what to do about the writing.