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Ok, here:


You have a bunch of extra spaces: after "2007," and after all of the periods in both paragraphs. They make big, visual holes that people's eyes will get stuck on. Use single spaces.


Also, you could do "JK Rumor" in bold, and do a shift-return after that line, so there's no space between it and the following paragraph. Right now "JK Rumor" is just sort of floating in space, not clearly connected to the description.


I don't see any spelling or grammar errors.

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