Aloha2U Posted September 19, 2018 Share Posted September 19, 2018 (edited) Removed. Edited September 23, 2018 by NCAmusings 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ausmumof3 Posted September 19, 2018 Share Posted September 19, 2018 He learned the importance of gun safety and taking a life. I would add something else in there as it sounds like he learned the “importance of taking a life” which seems a bit weird. Maybe something like “the significance of taking a life” or the “meaning of taking a life” or the “weight of taking a life” maybe separate it into two complete sentences. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aloha2U Posted September 20, 2018 Author Share Posted September 20, 2018 (edited) Agreed. His word selection was not the best at getting the point across. ? Thank you! Edited September 20, 2018 by NCAmusings 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aloha2U Posted September 20, 2018 Author Share Posted September 20, 2018 Any thoughts on... demonstration of mastery of a paragraph structure, essay structure, basic grammatical concepts, thesis statement, use of textual evidence, explanation, clear reasoning, and developing knowledge of rhetorical devices? Please, keep it coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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