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This is a narration given to me orally by my 8 year old.  What specific feedback would you give to help make improvements?   

 

 

 

The Boy and the Filberts

 

    There was a boy who had a pitcher full of filberts.  He got a whole giant handful, but his hand couldn’t get out.   So his mom came and said, “only take half.† So the boy only got half.

 

The moral of the story is don’t take more than you need.   

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