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I am typing up our song lyrics for the girls to use in a Christmas concert, and of all things, I am stuck on Silent Night. The words I was given have the line 'Radient beams from Thy holy face', but I always thought the first word was 'Radiance'. Is my memory wrong (maybe I'm just trying to make it sound more grammatical, because it sounds like a subject without a verb)?

This is the only place I can ask and be sure that there will be somebody who doesn't just respond with 'Who cares'!

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That line is not a complete phrase. The phrase starts in the line above and reads "love's pure light radiant beams from thy holy face with the dawn of redeeming grace."

 

So the subject of the phrase is "love's pure light" and the verb is "beams" and "radiant" is an adjective that was shoved out of place by the need to rhyme. (It should be "love's pure radiant light.")

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That line is not a complete phrase. The phrase starts in the line above and reads "love's pure light radiant beams from thy holy face with the dawn of redeeming grace."

 

So the subject of the phrase is "love's pure light" and the verb is "beams" and "radiant" is an adjective that was shoved out of place by the need to rhyme. (It should be "love's pure radiant light.")

 

 

AH, thank you so much! It suddenly makes sense now, and I can stop hearing it as 'wrong'.

 

 

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None of the lines are complete sentences. In poetry some words are implied.

 

(It's a) Silent night,(and a) holy night,

(O) Son of God, (who is) love's pure light;

(There are) Radiant beams from thy holy face

with the dawn of reeding grace,

Jesus, Lord, at thy birth.

Jesus, Lord, at thy birth.

 

 

I agree. It's a song lyric (and one that's been translated at that), so poetic license should be granted.

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