pooh bear Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 My ds, 14, wrote this short little story and would like someone other than his parents to read it. Would you mind reading and telling us what you think? It is based on an event that happened in a video game called Final Fantasy VII. A Retelling of the Nibelheim Incident Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean in Newcastle Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 It sounds like a fun video game. I can tell that your son likes to write. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooh bear Posted August 15, 2014 Author Share Posted August 15, 2014 It sounds like a fun video game. I can tell that your son likes to write. Keep it up! My Ds sends his thanks. Over the past few months he's found that he likes to write and wants to write more often. He's looking into taking part in NaNoWriMo this year. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin M Posted October 11, 2014 Share Posted October 11, 2014 Hi I just happened to stumble across this today and had to comment. What a great story. He did a great show of showing the story and very well with the dialogue. The conflict kept rising with Cloud being so self centered that he couldn't or wouldn't pay attention to anything else. Good job with the characters and different responses. Bravo! He definitely should do nanowrimo. Keep encouraging him to write. My son loves to write fan fiction as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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