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Hi I just happened to stumble across this today and had to comment.  What a great story.  He did a great show of showing the story and very well with the dialogue.  The conflict kept rising with Cloud being so self centered that he couldn't or wouldn't pay attention to anything else.  Good job with the characters and different responses.  Bravo!   He definitely should do nanowrimo. Keep encouraging him to write.  My son loves to write fan fiction as well.

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