Lolosoli Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 Does this sound right? Should it say all year long instead? I'm having trouble making sure it is worded properly. I'm not sure if I am just being overly critical and insecure. It is going on our business advertising packages and I'd hate for it to not sound proper. :001_huh: I cannot ask anyone in real life because we are trying to get everything ready before we show people. I'm hoping someone here can help!! :) ASK US ABOUT OUR SEASONAL HOME MAINTENANCE PACKAGES... WE KEEP YOUR HOME HAPPY YEAR ROUND! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desert Rat Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 I think it sounds fine without the 'all'. But, I'm insecure, too. I look forward to seeing what others have to say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolosoli Posted September 21, 2012 Author Share Posted September 21, 2012 LOL...I'm thinking it might sound better with "all" in it now too!! :) Hmmmm? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssavings Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 I think I'd prefer it with the "all", but I tend to be more wordy than necessary... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellie Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 Does this sound right? Should it say all year long instead? I'm having trouble making sure it is worded properly. I'm not sure if I am just being overly critical and insecure. It is going on our business advertising packages and I'd hate for it to not sound proper. :001_huh: I cannot ask anyone in real life because we are trying to get everything ready before we show people. I'm hoping someone here can help!! :) ASK US ABOUT OUR SEASONAL HOME MAINTENANCE PACKAGES... WE KEEP YOUR HOME HAPPY YEAR ROUND! I think it's fine, but it should be "home-maintenance," and I'd hypehante "year-round," as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
happyhomemaker Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 I think it's fine, but it should be "home-maintenance," and I'd hypehante "year-round," as well. :iagree: These were my thoughts as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IsabelC Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 I think "all year round" sounds kinda bigger and better than "year-round". But either is fine, really. As long as you don't put "We keep you're home happy all the month's of the year":tongue_smilie: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forget-Me-Not Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 I agree, hyphenate 'year-round'. Otherwise I think it's fine :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolosoli Posted September 22, 2012 Author Share Posted September 22, 2012 Thank-you so much everyone!! I really appreciate all your help!!! I've added the hyphen in both spots and the "all" is added in as well!! Thanks again!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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