Halcyon Posted September 4, 2012 Share Posted September 4, 2012 We are working on Step One, rough draft, and I am a bit confused between what it looks like the Student Text is asking for and what the Teacher Text gives as an example (which is much more elaborate than what I was looking for in his writing for a rough draft). We have watched videos of black smokers and some stuff on hydrothermal vents, and have read some online descriptions, but I am not sure at what point he should be incorporating more "vivid" imagery in his narrative. Based on the given outline, it seems that she's asking for something more straightforward for the rough draft? :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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