MaryE Posted August 20, 2012 Share Posted August 20, 2012 I'm hoping you good folks would look over a writing sample from my son. I started homeschooling him last year, but have always felt a little panicky over writing. We didn't have a set curriculum, and it's not his favorite thing to do. This example is something he wrote up to go with an imaginary world he created, complete with map. Do you feel he's on "grade level?". (All spelling and punctuation is original.) "One day, on planet Zeus in the Matt galaxy, the comet Eris crashed into North West Afraba. The nearby people were terrified! They thought it was the apocalypse! "Help!!" they cried out. "Save us!". It landed in their bonfire, which made it burn quicker, and made the people more scared. It is now called the Eris Crater. The Trench of Hades was made when the Acomahas were forced together. They are now joined together imperfectly, and the trench is taking in water from the Maple Ocean, and dumping into the Sophie Ocean. There are a lot of little islands in the Champion Ocean, though there are islands in all the oceans. Some are tropical, having resorts. Others are volcanic, and some are inhabited. Planet Zeus is a very exotic planet for sure." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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