QuirkyKapers Posted July 6, 2012 Share Posted July 6, 2012 (edited) Oh Tequila, you looked so refined, I believed you to be something benign. Oh Tequila, you seemed so simple, so smooth, If I had but known, I'd been more removed. Oh Tequila, you looked so inviting, so sweet, Without clearly thinking, I partook of the treat. With that first taste I was feeling the heat, As you craftily created your web of deceit. The second swallow had me feeling the flair, As you drew me deeper into your lair. The third round left me decidedly woozy, As it dawned on me you were a doozy. Too late, I uncovered the truth at your core, The worm was revealed and left me floored. Oh Toxic Tequila, of you songs have been sung, Can the damage you've dealt be undone? Oh Toxic Tequila, from you its vital I flee, You aren't truly fun, you're devouring me. Oh Toxic Tequila, I believed your veneer, I realize now I should of stuck with beer. Edited July 9, 2012 by Gratefulgal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 6, 2012 Share Posted July 6, 2012 Clever. :001_smile: Are you the author? It's good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuirkyKapers Posted July 6, 2012 Author Share Posted July 6, 2012 Yes- I wrote it. :) I love to make rhymes. I think Dr. Seuss and I could have been friends. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justLisa Posted July 6, 2012 Share Posted July 6, 2012 LOL. I remember back at highschool graduation the trip to Mazatlan. Never again can I even LOOK at a bottle of tequila without throwing up in my throat a little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 6, 2012 Share Posted July 6, 2012 Me too! Here's something I just recently wrote: Fly A million things consume me how I'm tethered. Nevermind the storms already weathered. They roar up again before me, big as life. I sit in silence stabbing like a knife. I know I'm just a blip like all the others. The secretaries, office girls and at-home mothers. I don't want it all to just jangle on past. Caught in the tossing current of life too fast. To soar out in the free my sweet ambition; to knock away this limited condition. No reins to hold me in, no bit to chafe. Just leaping into the open free and safe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuirkyKapers Posted July 6, 2012 Author Share Posted July 6, 2012 Nice Quill! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuirkyKapers Posted July 6, 2012 Author Share Posted July 6, 2012 (edited) :lurk5: Edited July 6, 2012 by QuirkyKapers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuirkyKapers Posted July 7, 2012 Author Share Posted July 7, 2012 Thought I would bump this up again. Anyone feel free to add your creativity to this thread! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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