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Is this too descriptive for a WWS summary?


creekmom
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Ds wrote this for Week 14 Day 1 narration. I think it's a bit much as far as details for a summary- what do you think? (not edited BTW)

 

 

 

Trapped

 

 

 

 

Baron Munchasen went on a trip to to his uncles home with his dad. A giant storm came and wreaked havoc. After they settled things down and fixed the ship they went on their way. When they got to land, Baron found himself trapped between a 40 foot long croc and a starving lion. Out of fear,he tumbled to the ground waiting for the slow burning pain of a million teeth sinking into his flesh. It never came. He opened his eyes and turned around to find that the lion had accidently leaped into the huge crocadiles open mouth when he fell. Baron reached for his knife and struck the beasts a few times with it so that they both fell on the blood splattered floor of the jungle.

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