Joyofsixreboot Posted February 1, 2012 Share Posted February 1, 2012 My 5th grader hasn't really written other than copywork until this year. He had vision issues and is probably behind. What is your input on this sample from an IEW paragraph he rewrote from KWO. The lodgepole pine is a very unique tree. Did you know it was an evergreen tree? Indians used lodgepole pines to make tipi poles. They were perfectly strait. They can be a hundred years old! The lodgepole pine pinecones are hard and depend on fires to make more. Today lodgepole pines are protected. I haven't edited with him at all so this is his rough work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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