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6th Grade Writing Sample- Descriptive Paragraph


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Any feedback would be much appreciated. My dd is in the 6th grade. The assignment was to write a paragraph describing a place.


Day at the Beach


Strolling along the sandy shore, I gaze at the lovely scenery around me. Spotting a cranky hermit crab, I jump away as it creeps toward me as fast as a cheetah! Bold and tall, the waves grow and build higher, then crash! I hear the continuous squawk of the seagull. Children giggle as they lick ice cream cones. This gorgeous day at the beach fills my mind with wonderful memories.

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