trafal Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Any feedback would be much appreciated. My dd is in the 6th grade. The assignment was to write a paragraph describing a place. Day at the Beach Strolling along the sandy shore, I gaze at the lovely scenery around me. Spotting a cranky hermit crab, I jump away as it creeps toward me as fast as a cheetah! Bold and tall, the waves grow and build higher, then crash! I hear the continuous squawk of the seagull. Children giggle as they lick ice cream cones. This gorgeous day at the beach fills my mind with wonderful memories. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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