TKDmom Posted January 2, 2012 Share Posted January 2, 2012 This is my dd's rewrite of one of Aesop's fables. She was very resistant to revising anything besides minor spelling and punctuation errors. I'd love to hear some feedback. The Sun and the Wind The sun and the wind were arguing which was stronger. The wind said he could pull up trees and houses, but the sun said he was the lord of the sky. Suddenly, they saw a traveler on the road, and the sun said, â€œWhoever can pull that manâ€™s coat off will be regarded as the stronger.â€ The wind agreed and said he would go first. The wind blew and blew, but the more he blew, the more the traveler wrapped his cloak around him. Soon the wind had to give up. Now it was the Sunâ€™s turn. He shown and shown. Soon the traveler found it too hot to have his coat on. Kindness works better than force. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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