Amy loves Bud Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 Hitler’s Rise to Power The National Socialist German Workers’ Party, The Nazis, believed Germany should be great again. The war hurt Germans extremely badly and Germany was in debt with Britain and France. The Nazis also believed Jewish people were bad; they were ante-Semites. After a lot of convincing speeches, Hitler became the leader of the Nazis. Hitler felt sorry for the Germans and how poor and desperate they were. He promised change for Germany, he promised no debt and he promised to get rid of what he thought were horrible Jews. Germany was pleased to hear these promises and elected Hitler as chancellor. Any thoughts? I want her to add in more detail rather than simply making the outline points into sentences. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean in Newcastle Posted March 31, 2011 Share Posted March 31, 2011 After what war? That's an important detail! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capt_Uhura Posted March 31, 2011 Share Posted March 31, 2011 My friend is having the same issue w/ her son. He just puts the outline into sentences and doesn't add any details. Perhaps the way to do it is to model it. Write an outline and then you write from the outline. Or find examples of where that has been done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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