Feedback on 3rd Grade Written Narration
Posted 18 July 2016 - 10:00 PM
Nomads killed Animals they roamed around and they had to pee in the woods. they loved hunting Animals. they had to move every week.
Posted 23 July 2016 - 05:55 PM
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Posted 27 July 2016 - 11:07 AM
That's just fine. It will be a really, really long time before her written narrations catch up to her oral narrations, meaning it will be a long time for her to write on the level she thinks. It will also be awhile before her grammar and mechanics become automatic in her writing. I think it's a great starting point for a 3rd grade narration.
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Posted 03 August 2016 - 07:40 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback! I worry so much about what we should be doing in Writing. I'm currently wrestling between using Write Shop C or W&R Fable with her.