KathyBC Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 Verb tense seems to be all over the place, I could use a fresh set of eyes: According to Doctor Mortimer, Sir Charles Baskerville was paranoid that a giant ghost hound was haunting him. Then he dies mysteriously just before his departure to London. Nobody but Doctor Mortimer noticed a gigantic dog track 20 yards from his unharmed body. After Doctor Mortimer finished his story, Sherlock Holmes bombards the doctor with questions. Thanks for any help! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chrysalis Academy Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 Verb tense seems to be all over the place, I could use a fresh set of eyes: According to Doctor Mortimer, Sir Charles Baskerville was paranoid that a giant ghost hound was haunting him. Then he dies mysteriously just before his departure to London. Nobody but Doctor Mortimer noticed a gigantic dog track 20 yards from his unharmed body. After Doctor Mortimer finished his story, Sherlock Holmes bombards the doctor with questions. Thanks for any help! I think the two verbs I marked in blue just need to go into the past tense, and the rest is ok. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KathyBC Posted April 16, 2014 Author Share Posted April 16, 2014 Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwg Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 I thought that as well. So relieved too! lol. Good to know I *could* be teaching it correctly. lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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